At A Standstill

At A Standstill is performed in real time and follows the conversations of the occupants of five cars, stuck in traffic on a motorway. I chose the M25 but it can be replaced by any motorway. It is easily staged - five chairs and a projection screen.

Cast: 20+

(but there are ample possibilities for multiple roles)

  • There is a car of teenage lads so the language is quite colourful but this can be toned down
  • This is an educational play that explores social issues and so is also a fun drama study text for the classroom

SCENE 10 

(Hepsi, Margaret and Elsie are listening to a recipe 

being discussed on the radio.) 

RADIO 

...and then rub the mixture between 

fingers and thumbs until you have a texture resembling very fine bread crumbs. Alternatively you could put it in a mixer and... 

HEPSI 

Salt! She's missed out salt! I would definitely have added salt to it.

ELSIE 

Sign of the times; salt isn't politically correct anymore. 

HEPSI 

Only a pinch, not a bloody bucket full! Margaret, you're the expert, what do you think? (Pause) Margaret, you okay? You look a bit wan. 

MARGARET 

I feel a bit wan, Hepsi dear, must be all the excitement. I could do with a nap. 

HEPSI 

A bit worrying seeing as your driving. Do you want to swap with me and get your head down? 

MARGARET 

No, I'm okay 

ELSIE 

Margaret, did you sort your seat out?

 

MARGARET 

Yes! I put the heating on for your seat too -

ELSIE 

I know! A bit disconcerting at first -thought I'd had an accident! But a kind gesture, thank you. 

HEPSI 

(Looking out of the window) You can tell she's a stroppy, little mare, can't you? 

ELSIE 

A difficult age .

HEPSI 

I think they're two dads, you know 

ELSIE 

What do you mean? 

HEPSI

A couple. 

ELSIE 

Really? (Pause) I think you're right. Isn't it wonderful that they can now live like that? I wish our Bernard was alive to witness it? 

HEPSI

Bernard? 

ELSIE 

My eldest brother 

HEPSI 

Never heard you mention him. 

ELSIE 

Case of habit. We were never allowed to talk about him, growing up, and it sort of stuck. He was one of those, you see. 

HEPSI 

You mean gay? 

ELSIE 

I do, yes. Dad threw him out and disowned him. I searched and found him, when dad died, and we used to meet for coffee once a month; he was so funny, in a sad sort of

 

way. Then I met Harold and got married and we drifted apart again. I invited him over, a couple of times, but Harold was a bit awkward around him and he just stopped coming. Shame, really, because we were the only family he had. I saw him at the end, when he was very poorly with the cancer, and I met his partner, Horace, lovely man. He'd kept him secret for twenty three years. Horace and I still write. 

HEPSI 

Nice-looking couple, that pair 

ELSIE 

Very handsome! Oh they're letting her back in - 

HEPSI 

She's got a face like a smacked arse! (Waving out the window) Little lad's a sweetie, though 

 

 

ELSIE 

Do you want a snack, Hepsi? 

HEPSI 

What you got? 

ELSIE 

Jaffa cakes. 

HEPSI 

Shall I get the flask out? Elevenses, how very civilised! 

ELSIE 

Tea and biscuits, Margaret? (Margaret is asleep at the 

wheelShe's only gone and nodded off! 

HEPSI 

Good job we're not moving! Margaret! 

ELSIE 

Margaret, dear, wake up! We've poured you tea. (Margaret doesn't respond) Margaret!  (Pause) Oh dear...Hepsi...do your nursing thing! 

 

HEPSI 

(Checking her pulse) That's not going to work, love .

ELSIE 

(Panicking) Oh my God! What are we going to do? 

HEPSI 

We are going to calmly drink our tea, eat our Jaffa Cakes and review our situation. 

ELSIE 

Review our situation! What's to review? We're stuck on the motorway, in a stolen car, that neither of us can drive, with a dead person at the wheel. Situation reviewed! 

HEPSI 

You're panicking. Drink your tea!  (Elsie sips her tea.

Right! What to do? (Looking out the window again) We could ask one of them for help? They look very kind 

ELSIE 

But the children - not fair to involve them 

HEPSI 

You're right. Who else have we got?

(Hepsi looks out of the car through all the windows. Elsie continues to dutifully sip her tea.) 

ELSIE 

She looks very peaceful; I think she's smiling 

HEPSI 

Smiling? I bet she's pissing herself! She's left us in a right pickle!

 

ELSIE 

What a lovely way to go. 

HEPSI 

Stuck in traffic on the M25? 

ELSIE 

Doing something you really believe in; making a difference; fighting for a cause, you know... 

HEPSI 

Not just sitting in a chair waiting for the inevitable 

ELSIE 

Yes. We've got to get to Dorking, it's what she would've wanted. We've got to get her to her niece 

HEPSI 

I'm sure Penny will be thrilled. Hello, we've brought your aunt to visit/ but you don't need to go to any trouble because she's dead! 

ELSIE 

It's important that we finish the mission she started. 

HEPSI 

I don't want to piss on your parade, Elsie, but I do feel the need to bring to your attention, the elephant in the car 

ELSIE 

I'm glad she can't hear you, she'd be most upset! 

HEPSI 

She's stuck behind the wheel. How are we 

meant to drive the car? 

ELSIE 

(Sipping her tea) I'm thinking.